Look, have a butchers

Through analysis the briefs I came up with the idea for a brief, which is to Brand a high end butchers. Heres the work sheet.

Product-Range-Distribution

Analysed briefs from ISTD, YCN and D&AD.Looked at what I liked about the briefs.
Looked further into the briefs, putting them through areas of Subject, Problem, Product, Range and Media.I chose different items from the lists to come up with my plan. (Words circled in RED)

web

Tee page designs

This design for the 'tees' section shows 3 designs each page. It works better than the 10 designs each page because it shows more detail of the tees.

Contact page designs, ultra simple, map, contact details

Web

Link bar designs, I think the last design works best with the lines either side of the word to show where you are in the website. It's simpler and more subtle than the boxes and circles.

Home page designs. I think the 2nd design works well because of the large logo, gives it are more visually exciting feel. Another idea is to have a shot of some tee shirts close up with type of the top.

Logo

Web

Our Enterprise company is a T-shirt company named 'Straight Cuts'

Here are some logo ideas i had.

What I want ?

This is the list I made which drives me design practice. This list will help me find out what sort of designer I want to be.

Web

Here is a schematic layout of the website that would be for the enterprise business. Our groups business is going to be a tee shirt company.
Brief for the web design

Final 10

Rolling stones

The type face for 'sun' and 'love & laugh' don't go well with each other needs more work to it.
I changed the fonts and arrangement, also added a little heart inside the 'V' in love. A subtle touch will works well.I felt the orange was a bit too intense and also orange never prints out that well. So i tried it with grey. The white on grey looks fresh.

1967

My first attempt of the poster...I thought the 'eyes' looked a bit wrong so I tried shearing it and adding lines. I think it still needs work
I added lines to emulate the shape of an eye.
It all looked a bit straight and the same size so I made the 'OPEN' bigger.

If 6 was 9

The lines either side of the big 'die' are causing me trouble. I can't get them to fit and look good.Here i put the lines so they are parelel against the lines and i changed the 'I'm' because it was too big

Hit the road Jack

The lyric ends in 'no more' but in some lines in the song it repeats 'no more, no more, no more'. I tried to repeat it and make it smaller to make it look like its fading out.



Here I tried putting the year in a lighter opacity in the background. I think it looks alright but maybe there is too much going on.