Final Crit

Only a few problems that arose in the crit, mostly to do with audio levels.

Here are the changes i have made for the feedback i got for the Idents.

The treatment of the word 'right' should be different to show that their are 2 different people speaking. I tried different fonts, but it didn't work, so i changed the colour to show the different voices. Went with purple to go with the background

"I Lied" too quiet compared to the music. So i bumped up the levels.

And for the Title Sequence the main problems were,

-The arms move at different times

-Should make it look like they 'hit' the E4 logo rather than push it

-Kiss song is too loud through out compared to the talking.

Four Idents

Here are my four idents, i have 2 themes, one blue and one purple. This gives them a little more variety so they don't all look the same. I also added on the E4 logo and the time of the program at the end. I added a little 'slap' sound when the E4 hits the screen. I did this to give it a little bit of comedy a the end. Also gives it more depth to the motion.

Ident Attempts

Here is my first attempt at one of the idents, i think the music works well when it kicks in after the quote.

Looking at the ident i thought that the colour difference was quite harsh with the blue then to the purple for the title of the program. So i changed the end title colours to blues/greens to go with the quote.

Title Sequence

Here is the final 50 second Title Sequence

Sequence so far..

Here is what i have so far, there are a few things that i think need to change. One being the levels of Audio of the Quotes. Some of them get drowned out by Kiss. The scream is also too loud at the beginning. A few of the transitions between scenes are not as smooth as i would like them to be also.

Too Fast

Looking at the video of what i have so far I feel that the pace of the sequence is to fast, so i will widen the gaps between each 'quote' this will give me more time to go inbetween each composition smoother.

Who is your daddy ? red ?

Looking at the blue arrows i decided to change it to fists. Red fists. I feel this works better for the context on the piece.

Who is your daddy ?

Experiment with the arrows being used as a sort of screen wipe.

Audio Experimentation

Here i was experimenting with Type and sound to give it new characteristics. I think the metal clunk as each letter hits the screen will work well in the Title of the sequence, it goes with the action aspect of Arnolds films.

Intro to title sequence

I need to make the 2 Arnolds at the beginning come in smoother and also the pink rings. I will add a Arnie shout over the faces that appear at the end.

Dillan you sob

Kinetic type test

Mouth test

Here is a test i did to make Arnolds mouth move to make it look like he is speaking, the 'south park' style although crude works well with the humorous style i am approaching this brief. For this test i did my own impersonation of Arnie, but for the actual title sequence i shall edit out Arnolds voice from his films.

screen wipe test