Too Fast

Looking at the video of what i have so far I feel that the pace of the sequence is to fast, so i will widen the gaps between each 'quote' this will give me more time to go inbetween each composition smoother.

Who is your daddy ? red ?

Looking at the blue arrows i decided to change it to fists. Red fists. I feel this works better for the context on the piece.

Who is your daddy ?

Experiment with the arrows being used as a sort of screen wipe.

Umbrella

Colour Variations on Final layout


I think the green and blue with the white umbrellas look the best, i shall attempt to screen print these as i would think it would give a crisp defined edge with strong colours.

Story boards

Umbrella

Here are the developments on my umbrella scale designs.

Umbrella Design sheets